Story introduction and seven character backstories rewritten, with new introductions for Yuki Arai, Dante Okafor, Silas Moreau, Renata Cruz, Irina Volkova, Mei Lin Zhou and Jin Park. Locations also
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- Changed:Intro hookA city of warm rain and two sets of books, and nobody can say who vouched for the newest pair of hands.The rain never falls, the broker charges for silence, and the job nobody signs hides one unread detail.
- Changed:Story introductionwrittenrewritten
Characters
- Added:Yuki Arai: introductionwritten
- Changed:Yuki Arai: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Dante Okafor: introductionwritten
- Changed:Dante Okafor: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Silas Moreau: introductionwritten
- Changed:Silas Moreau: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Renata Cruz: introductionwritten
- Changed:Renata Cruz: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Irina Volkova: introductionwritten
- Changed:Irina Volkova: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Mei Lin "Auntie Mei" Zhou: introductionwritten
- Changed:Mei Lin "Auntie Mei" Zhou: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Jin Park: introductionwritten
- Changed:Jin Park: backstorywrittenrewritten
Place Intros
- Changed:District 7 Night Marketwrittenrewritten
- Changed:The Seventh Circuitwrittenrewritten
- Changed:Sleepwell Capsuleswrittenrewritten
- Changed:Volkova Clinicwrittenrewritten