Rewritten story introduction and locations, plus new introductions and backstories for eleven characters. The intro hook was also revised.
What changed in detail
Details
- Changed:Intro hookA prize is chosen, a crew is not yet told, and one unchecked detail will decide who keeps what.A cut of the take, a crew that never says the whole plan, and one name nobody here would trade on.
- Changed:Story introductionwrittenrewritten
Characters
- Added:Grace Hallow: introductionwritten
- Changed:Grace Hallow: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Nell Pike: introductionwritten
- Changed:Nell Pike: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Nathaniel "Nate" Crowe: introductionwritten
- Changed:Nathaniel "Nate" Crowe: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Catalina "Cat" Vargas: introductionwritten
- Changed:Catalina "Cat" Vargas: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Tobias "Toby" Finch: introductionwritten
- Changed:Tobias "Toby" Finch: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Molly Durant: introductionwritten
- Changed:Molly Durant: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Tess Durant: introductionwritten
- Changed:Tess Durant: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Henry Ashcombe: introductionwritten
- Changed:Henry Ashcombe: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:Edmund Hale: introductionwritten
- Changed:Edmund Hale: backstorywrittenrewritten
- Added:William "Will" Tanner: introductionwritten
- Changed:William "Will" Tanner: backstorywrittenrewritten
Place Intros
- Changed:The Sign of the Mermaidwrittenrewritten
- Changed:The Black Ternwrittenrewritten
- Changed:Fort Charleswrittenrewritten
- Changed:Gallows Pointwrittenrewritten
